Performing arts high school?

answers1: I think this was very good. I like how you explained the
school's setting and what the schedule will be like. You went really
into depth with what the school is about which can help the reader
figure out if this school is really for them. I myself liked reading
it because i love performing and I'm more of an artistic person and
this school sounded like something i would love to be apart of. One
thing you can work on is probably describing how this school affects
the child's behavior or future attending this school. Does this school
promise them a future career in arts? Does this school have different
behavior outcomes then other average schools? Just questions to think
about but overall you did great. :)
answers2: One of my friends named Shelby goes to a Performing Arts
High School. She said that it is really fun and gets you on the right
track to a professional career. Plus, Shelby goes for free! (So maybe
you can too!) Good Luck this year! [: She goes to one in New Jersey. I
forget the name of it though. I'm sorry. You can look up Performing
Art High Schools in the New Jersey area. (She lives near Ocean City if
that helps.)
answers3: There are A LOT of grammatical errors.
answers4: my school has that music thing too. we call it walking
music. its cool. one day it didnt work, and i was so lost with out it.
answers5: I was interested.
answers6: To me, it seemed like one big long run on sentence. Very
interesting, just work on your punctuation and spelling.